Peer review #4

Hi Erin,

 

I really enjoyed reading your letter. I thought you had it planned out well and the structure was short but you still managed to contain all the information you wanted to get across to whom the letter concerned. I also enjoyed the last line, which you gave your own unique flair and opinion to. Great work!

 

Original comment can be viewed here :

https://whatalittime.wordpress.com/2017/10/12/dear-miss-slattery/comment-page-1/#comment-22

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