Hi Elleni!
What I deeply enjoyed about your blog this week was the simplicity. You managed to keep your poem rather short but effective, as you have used powerful language that provoked extensive thinking for myself. You made me wonder why the devil could behold so much beauty as I usually would not see the devil in a positive light at all. Your use of the words “inflames” and “Extinguishes” really brought your poem together. The only thing I would recommend is to extend your poem just by a few lines as is very intriguing and as a reader, I was left wanting more.
Keep up the amazing work!
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